Get rid of those filtering words to tighten the point of view of your character.
http://blog.janicehardy.com/2012/07/youll-have-to-go-through-me-eliminating.html
Get rid of those filtering words to tighten the point of view of your character.
http://blog.janicehardy.com/2012/07/youll-have-to-go-through-me-eliminating.html
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